That Elvis 
        Kind of Lovin' 
        by Hezekiah Allen 
        Taylor 
        
        
For Melissa
         he sat in front of the mirror for two full hours trying to figure 
          out how to sneer
          this was before he picked her up at eight, right on time, in his roommate's 
          old nash
          before she smiled politely at the flat-matte primer gray that dusted 
          her fingers
          as she braced herself to slide sweet little ass onto cracked vinyl 
        
       *** 
        
 her mother had taught her to love vegas and elvis and robert urich, 
          in just that order
          she had grown up suburbian, but distasteful of the Allentown housing 
          tracts that spotted
          her world like connect-the-dots, but the dots never connected for her
          what does she know, she's only twenty
          at twenty, the entire universe is pressed, blunt force, into the apple 
          of elvis' eye
        
       *** 
        
 "in speedway," he said to her at 9:15, stuttering over his own arousal
          "well in speedway it was all just so." 
        
 "for your information," she poured more franzia from the box on the 
          counter,
          tilting it towards her at such a dramatic angle, only the pressure of 
          her thumb avoids accident
          "in speedway he all of sang one love song to a four-year-old and sucked 
          face with nancy sinatra
          not even first base in anyone's little black book."
        
 from there, the party took a very nasty little turn
        
       ***
        
 the nash didn't leave much room to create drama
          and elvis lovers can get little relief in a standard car
          but he put his fingers in all the right places and when he did, she 
          could almost imagine he was the king
          who would never own a nash and would set the scene just so:
          suspicious minds playing on repeat, he would say to her -- in the midst 
          of the torrid action --
          "takin' care of business baby" as he traced a lightning bolt with his 
          index finger, tight force,
          down her spine
        
       ***
        
 and more than anything, afterward, he wanted to say
          "thank ya
          thank ya very much"
        
 and practice (now a tradition) twitching the lip upward just right, 
          just so 
        
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